A short poem i started 10:16 p.m and finished at 10:36 p.m dated march 05,2007.
Across The Water
I started as a fool on this road
in the beginning being guided all the way
it was not me that tried to walk it safe
it was just everyone around me to say
People seemed to walk with me away into this lake
road that led to it i called life
i had to take away myself from me
in order to be just safe
Smiling faces,crying ones
even the ones which showed me crap
drowned with me in this lake i sank in
deeper than i thought
So,
soon enough i made a boat of myself
a boat with my soul on
drowned some and rescued so many
it grew big,to be just gone
The colors on it, they just kept on changing
bloomed to die again
but everytime they bloomed,they gave me life
gave me life to be just the same
And through many waves of love and pain
something that always rises strong
is the light that shines on that road
still keeps on shining,no matter how far i have gone
And now when im back on the road again
realising im on the other side
the waves they still wash at my feet
sometimes causing pain
But as i move and as i stroll around
kicking pebbles on the way
the waves they now just echo on
and i see myself again…
PS:Trev..HAPPY BIRTH-A-DAY!!!!!
…anyways…HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
PPS:I have been trying to edit this and GET the smileys
working…but they just arent smileying today..
(hope this one comes right!!
)..<<<or maybe this one too)
PPPS:ok..i figured it out..it was the ” ” spaces
wohoOOOOOOO!
3 Comments
May 12, 2007 at 8:36 am
i was too lazy to read the whole thing..but…fuck..ur a grr8 poet :p…keep on poeting\poeming\poeing….err..(pick da correct 1″:D”)
October 17, 2007 at 5:43 am
oye..poet….ultimate poem….wow..ur succha a “hunk”!!no..truly…the poems….it wants u to red more….wat r doin in a eng colleg…..????excelnt poem!!!
August 20, 2008 at 6:19 pm
is it d 6A block road u tokin bout or d 13A one..lolz