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Ohk…here i am….the bloggie doggie’s first blog…
Here’s a song a poem or whatever you may call it…which i thought i had SUPPOSEDLY written for one of my friends but now when I’m posting it here…i think it wasn’t SUPPOSEDLY for her…but guess she has influenced it somehow…anyways…
Here it goes…
**THE** Song
Ive Got someone that makes me see
All the beutiful things that have never been with me
And the blessings of this life,
which i thought were not mine…
Even your thoughts they make me feel in heaven and
Your presence..
it takes me there…sugar
Her smile is something I can always feel inside
When everythin’s broken,i feel on the lost side
Its just her thoughts,
that keeps my heart alive…
Her eyes they seem to always pray for me
She looks upon me even in her dreams
and if i dream too long
she makes sure im not alone….
She makes my tears feel like lost in time
When i see her hands open for me in her eyes
I feel so blessed for all that she has inside….
I have found my life inside someone else
why was i running alone when i had been blessed
With someone so beutiful,someone so good….
There will be no pain
When you are there with me
And i will never hate wander seeking gain
When you are there with me..
Even your thoughts they make me feel in heaven and
Your presence..
it takes me there…sugar
xxx
P-s:i can’t believe i missed my simpsons while writing this…
8 Comments
April 4, 2007 at 2:33 pm
*clap clap clap clap*
…n dat was a Standin’ Ovation…
*Sniff sniff sniff sniff *
~~~>>>Munda kitna bada ho gaya hai…
Sugar bhi pasand aane lage hain…
*sigh*
April 5, 2007 at 6:24 am
U R SUPPOSED 2 WRITE SOMETHIN IN UR BLOG, U MORON!!!!!
hehehehe…. bt itz a nice start… so u hv learnt frm me sumthin 2day- how 2 mk blogs…..
1 question- d poem(or song, watevaaaa), has been REALLY writtn by u or u hv tapofied frm sum1else’s blog????
P.S.: i m allergic 2 sugar, it mks me hyperactive:))
shaggy
April 5, 2007 at 6:30 am
u ass..its an original…:)
*wink wink*
April 5, 2007 at 6:52 am
Beautiful is the word!!!
each word woven in a lovely rhythm……..
its WONDERFUL!!! Beautifully penned…Let d good wrk flow!!!
annd shimplie speeekingh.
dhish boi ish bheri thalenthed..
GO-ON n ON,…
~~!!!PEACE!!~~~
April 6, 2007 at 11:42 am
hey hey hey!!!
i hav already read it and hav already complimented it..nevr knew u started bloggin..kal hi realise kiya ki wht actualli does bloggie doggie means..:P
waise gud work!!!
April 6, 2007 at 4:43 pm
oi….. u rawk totallly…
kudos [;)]
April 10, 2007 at 9:04 am
awesome work #…
….
I never knew you could write so well
and great composition yaar *clap clap clap clap*….
April 15, 2007 at 1:37 pm
GO SUCK A SQUIRELL, U SON OF A GUN..