April 4, 2007...12:09 pm

Riders on the storm…(the song i’m listening to now…:) )

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Ohk…here i am….the bloggie doggie’s first blog…

Here’s a song a poem or whatever you may call it…which i thought i had SUPPOSEDLY written for one of my friends but now when I’m posting it here…i think it wasn’t SUPPOSEDLY for her…but guess she has influenced it somehow…anyways…

Here it goes…

**THE** Song

Ive Got someone that makes me see

All the beutiful things that have never been with me

And the blessings of this life,

which i thought were not mine…

Even your thoughts they make me feel in heaven and

Your presence..

it takes me there…sugar

Her smile is something I can always feel inside

When everythin’s broken,i feel on the lost side

Its just her thoughts,

that keeps my heart alive…

Her eyes they seem to always pray for me

She looks upon me even in her dreams

and if i dream too long

she makes sure im not alone….

She makes my tears feel like lost in time

When i see her hands open for me in her eyes

I feel so blessed for all that she has inside….

I have found my life inside someone else

why was i running alone when i had been blessed

With someone so beutiful,someone so good….

There will be no pain

When you are there with me

And i will never hate wander seeking gain

When you are there with me..

Even your thoughts they make me feel in heaven and

Your presence..

it takes me there…sugar

xxx

P-s:i can’t believe i missed my simpsons while writing this…

8 Comments

  • *clap clap clap clap*

    …n dat was a Standin’ Ovation…

    *Sniff sniff sniff sniff *

    ~~~>>>Munda kitna bada ho gaya hai…

    Sugar bhi pasand aane lage hain…

    *sigh*

  • U R SUPPOSED 2 WRITE SOMETHIN IN UR BLOG, U MORON!!!!!
    hehehehe…. bt itz a nice start… so u hv learnt frm me sumthin 2day- how 2 mk blogs…..
    1 question- d poem(or song, watevaaaa), has been REALLY writtn by u or u hv tapofied frm sum1else’s blog????

    P.S.: i m allergic 2 sugar, it mks me hyperactive:))

    shaggy

  • u ass..its an original…:)
    *wink wink*

  • Beautiful is the word!!!
    each word woven in a lovely rhythm……..
    its WONDERFUL!!! Beautifully penned…Let d good wrk flow!!!

    annd shimplie speeekingh.
    dhish boi ish bheri thalenthed..
    GO-ON n ON,…
    ~~!!!PEACE!!~~~

  • hey hey hey!!!
    i hav already read it and hav already complimented it..nevr knew u started bloggin..kal hi realise kiya ki wht actualli does bloggie doggie means..:P
    waise gud work!!!

  • oi….. u rawk totallly…
    kudos [;)]

  • awesome work #…
    I never knew you could write so well :-P ….
    and great composition yaar *clap clap clap clap*….

  • GO SUCK A SQUIRELL, U SON OF A GUN..


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